The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.
The given chart illustrates the quantity of packages delivered by two main mail services firms in the period between 1920 and 2000.
Overall, the FedEx company had a huge plunge in 1950 while the TNT company witnessed a rapid upward trend over 80 years.
At first, the figure for packages delivered by FedEx stood at precisely 15000 which tripled the number of parcels of the TNT company in 1920. From 1920 to 1950, the quantity of FedEx parcels rocketed enormously to just under 25000 and then suddenly plummeted to a considerable number which was approximately 12000. However, despite the dramatic change of the FedEx company, parcels of TNT mail service rose slightly by about 2000 in 1950. Moreover, the figure for TNT packages continued to increase over 50 years and in 1990, there was a tremendous surge in the number of TNT parcels, helping the packages delivered by the TNT company reach the highest peak at roughly 25000 which was as large as the FedEx packs in 1930, while the quantity of parcels of the other firm fluctuated markedly and then stayed stable under 20000 between 1950 and 2000.
- The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000 82
- Some students prefer to study alone Others prefer to study with a group of students Which do you prefer Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 56
- Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library Which should your school choose to buy computers or books Use specific reasons and examples to support your recommendation 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87830687831 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40726204573 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534391534392 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.291658181 43.030603864 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.666666667 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259263188195 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147064867659 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609574522113 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173487364716 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793673178678 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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