The diagram below show how a solar powered water pump works. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and, make comparisons where relevant.
The pictorial representation illustrates the information about how a solar powered water pump is utilised to supply water for the countryside with using three various kinds of equipments.
In overall, there are three types of components such as solar panel, an underground bore as well as water tank containing water is spending into this process. In contrast, in this method four steps is involved. However, omission of any step will halt the whole process.
With regards to an initial step, a solar panel is utilise to collecting power from sun rays with using photovoltaic cells and these cells stand their mouth in the front of sun. Secondly, the collection of DC currents is sent into underground bore by panel.
The diagram further proves that in the next stage, this Direct Current power is spent to receiving water from the depth of land. Likewise, this water pump is built up into the ground level. In the following stage, these water is taken from ground with the help of pipes and pipes throw these water into the tank. Eventually, the water tank supplies these fresh water to the whole village by pipeline.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'utilised'.
Suggestion: utilised
...ds to an initial step, a solar panel is utilise to collecting power from sun rays with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, likewise, second, secondly, so, well, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51622986676 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1958504438 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15529389952 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624974546011 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573379013812 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102666897266 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637466096236 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.