The flowchart illustrates the life-cycle of a fish species named salmons. Overall, there are 3 stages revolving around the lifespan of a salmon, which spans to approximately 10 years.
Salmons start off as eggs, laid on stony riverbeds of a slow river, underneath long aquatic plants known as reeds. This lasts for 5-6 months, until the eggs hatch into a 3-6 centimeter long larvae called ‘fry’. A fry lives roughly 4 years on a faster flowing region of a river.
After the next 5 years, they are known as ‘smolt’, which comparing to a fry is 9 centimeters longer. They then move into the open sea, and spends 5 years of their lives there.As time progresses, they are termed as an ‘adult salmon’, where they increase significantly to about 76 centimeters in length. As they reach maturity, they return to their birthplace, so they cal lay eggs and restart the cycle.
In conclusion, the salmon metamorphisizes into 3 different stages in their lifetime. It can be said that, each stage of development occurs in different aquatic environments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11235955056 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2116164925 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679775280899 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2398837092 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.7272727273 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780744933597 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347026182215 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538583225732 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0479310141596 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518440625327 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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