The pictures below illustrate a sizable fish’s life pattern named the Salmon.
It is vividly apparent that they turn into mature Salmons after passing three significant stages and spending a long time. In each stage, they have a prolonged limited growth.
At first, their eggs are lain near small stone, and they are being protected by reeds, which are located in upper water with slow moving. This takes 6 months approximately.
At this later stage, eggs have turned into small infants called fry. Their length is 3 to 8 cm while living in lower river with faster water speed than upper river.
After 4 years, they continue their growth and become bigger fish called smolt whose size varies from 12 to 15 cm.
Then, 5 years old smolts are considered as adult salmons when their size is in 70 to 76 centimeters limitation. Furthermore, in these phase mentioned creatures are able to live in open sea areas and continue the cycle by breeding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., they have a prolonged limited growth. At first, their eggs are lain near small...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8527607362 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40914550918 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.736196319018 0.547539520022 134% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6821716427 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0884841709369 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352153656113 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481528582346 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524575041805 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548818867093 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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