The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now

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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The figure illustrates the floor plan of central library now and how it looked two decade earlier.
In the past, there were two circular table having eight chairs each located right in the centre, visible just by stepping inside the library. On the right there was enquiry desk to help with general library rekated inquiries and task. The section allocated to reading newspapers and magazines was located on the other side of enquiry desk just last the entrance, whereas area to read childrens book was to the northern side of the desk right next to non-fiction books of adults. Straight towards west of the non-fiction area there was adult fiction books , and on its north was the room allocated to computer games , cds and videos.
Central library now is more organized and is filled with features ans services. After entering the library we can see cafe on the right and computer room on its left. Moving few steps north from the entrance on its right adult non fiction books is moved further up to the north, and information desk as well as self service machine ia added to manage the empty space. Nearest room from the fiction book did consist of children book that is now converted to lecture room. The place having computers on the top left is extended and converted to interactive storytelling room where events happen from time to time. The books are arranged on the left of the door entering the room, whereas two sofas are positioned on the two diagonal area to the top left and the right buttom section of the room. All reference books replaced adult fiction books and the center area js open consistiong of no seating area like in the past.
Overall, the beautifully planned central library is equipped wirh modern facilities and rooms are assigned to make interactive learning possible.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'decade' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'decades'.
Suggestion: decades
...ntral library now and how it looked two decade earlier. In the past, there were two c...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'table' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tables'.
Suggestion: tables
.... In the past, there were two circular table having eight chairs each located right ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 554, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ction area there was adult fiction books , and on its north was the room allocated...
^^
Line 2, column 614, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...was the room allocated to computer games , cds and videos. Central library now i...
^^
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Nearest'.
Suggestion: The Nearest
...ine ia added to manage the empty space. Nearest room from the fiction book did consist ...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, whereas, as to, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 310.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81290322581 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3780841769 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 106.607317073 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 283.868780488 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7108694572 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871020191144 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473742212673 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846091461999 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111943352619 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121765342097 0.0819641961636 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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