The diagram below shows geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration presents how a geothermal power plant accumulates energy from the earth’s surface. Passing through 5 stages, starting from the biosphere then into the underground and back up where it is processed.
The first step is the cold water gets pumped 4.5 km deep into the ground. As it reaches the injection well, it flows into the geothermal zone where the hot rocks are situated heating the cold water before it arrives in the production well. From there, the cold water has become hot and is pumped up and stored in a condenser which collects the steam and connects it to a turbine that uses the steam to power on. As the turbine starts to function, an electricity generator uses the turbine power to produce electricity. Now, a renewable energy is produced; ready for various consumption.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9197080292 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74108730123 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605839416058 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6135017009 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11108521066 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493520392934 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328388566009 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084225043083 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102537482483 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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