The diagram illustrates in what manner the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers the latest sources of weather so as to publicize to the civilians.
Overall, there are four steps to assemble the temperature and water steam in the atmosphere: estimating, inspection, solving and searching the mistakes, then broadcasting through the media. The four stages all come through technical personnels to ensure what to delete or what to specialize and to discover the problems if possible.
First of all, after the staffs from the Australian Bureau of Meteorology send satellites into space, the information will be sent to radar stations which connect to their satellites. Moreover, they also use drifting buoys to predict the weather. Satellites not only supply the anticipation but also send photos of the whole vision directly from space. Next, radar stations display the incoming weather through radar screen.
The combination of equipment from the first step (satellites, radar stations, and drifting buoys) is to result in the synoptic chart. Later, all the information gathered moves to preparation teams to figure out the possible troubles and be ready to upload to the media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...y gathers the latest sources of weather so as to publicize to the civilians. Overall,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42162162162 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84030266188 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610810810811 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4782406141 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.444444444 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122006309651 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493125155208 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655675759216 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819986204873 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789583435524 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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