The picture illustrates getting the knowledge on weather to produce data for forecasts in the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
Generally, there are a number of steps to have incoming information to input on the computer. Furthermore, audiences can hear the information through various broadcasts.
Initially, the satellite photo is received from a satellite for the analyzing and forecasting the weather, while the radar screen is obtained from satellite, continuing to radar to obtain the information. Afterwards, there are three information resources sent to synoptic chart, and those can be seen through satellite, radar, and drifting buoy. Then, all of information is collected to the computer.
In the next stages, the computer personates the preparing broadcast for the TV, radio, and recorded announcement. On the TV, a newsreader gives the information to audiences living in houses, while the radio transmits the forecast to audiences in the car or living sea areas. Moreover, if people are in the military base or malls, they will hear the weather forecast through recorded announcement.
- Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used Others however argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Some people buy local products while others prefer international products Do you agree or disagree 67
- the map below show the village of stokeford in1930 and 2010 summarise the information and make comparison where relevant 61
- The diagram below gives information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...n resources sent to synoptic chart, and those can be seen through satellite, radar, and d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55621301775 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11344955835 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573964497041 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.504320768 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175231493468 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739379919055 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621553221827 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11346906514 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639716550316 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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