The diagram below shows how electricity generated in hydroelectric power station? Summaries the main information by reporting the main features and make comparison where possible.
The picture below illustrates the production of electric current from water known as hydroelectricity in grid station.
As an overall trend blueprint describe the reversible process in manufacturing of electricity. In day time forward process of power generation and at night opposite process of collecting water in dam.
First step in generation of electricity is storage of water in high level reservoir dam in which intake open daytime while close in night. What it means that at night further movement of water downward stop. Second step is flow of water to produce light in sunlight while at dark water pumped back for creation of storage again.
In next step water flow to power station where electricity generated. The power station consist of reversible turbine. What it mean at day time operate generator and temporarily keep water in low reservoir. But at night work opposite direction by pumping water to high level reservoir. Eventually, generator supply energy to national grid through power lines.
- the chart below shows the number of girls education out of 100 boys in developing and developed countries 73
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and1980.Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 78
- Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree? 56
- the table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.summarise the information by reporting main features and making comparison where relavent. 56
- the table show the information about change in the mode of traveled in england in 1985 and 2000.smarise the information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible, 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...wn as hydroelectricity in grid station. As an overall trend blueprint describe the...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'means'?
Suggestion: means
... consist of reversible turbine. What it mean at day time operate generator and tempo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83556489758 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8565655776 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7272727273 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122392206669 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060428356134 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596303619562 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900954527121 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544712324458 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.