air traffic increasingly leading to noise,pollution and construction of air ports.one reason is that increase in growth of low passenger flights often holiday destination,government should increase taxes on air fair.do you agreee or not
Air traffic becoming incedibilly popular.Air pollution is causing noise,pollution and building up new air port one reason is to increase in economy class flights particularily on holiday.Many argued that authorities should lessen air traffic by inhancing the air fair.in this essay i will dicuss both prospectives and why government should increase taxes on air fair.
Although,increasingly usage of this mode of transportation is effecting our environment.firstly,these heavily structured machiens produce a roaring sound which causes deafening.A report publish by Harvard University in 2003 the employers who work at airport were listen more loudly as compare to other people.secondaly,these air traffic release a much amount of gasses which are being depleting ozen layer and also cause acidic rain.because smoke consist of sulfer and nitrogen gasses which also have impact on land and historical buildings.like in india Taj Mehal is eroding because of acidic rain.research depict that is removing fertilizing soil layer.hence,more land become barren as a result of acidic rain.thirdly,constracting new air port require alots of land which definitly obtain from cutting forest and destorying natural habitate of animals.researches shows thats due to deforestation earth temperatures is increasing and one of major causes for global warming.
Although, its government responsibility to check in these flights and to increase air fair by increasing heavy taxes on it.as a consequence,people would atleast use road transportation to move with in country and countries where by road trip is possible.that would be in turn better for human beings.
in most of the countries air fairs become lessen on public holidays.so,many people perfer to travel by air.At the end i totally agree with increase in air fair could save our environment somehow.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, second, so, third, thirdly, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71739130435 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89785026841 2.80592935109 139% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 303.589360815 49.4020404114 615% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 394.5 106.682146367 370% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.0 20.7667163134 332% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376355291949 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255230438056 0.084324248473 303% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151575014753 0.0667982634062 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255230438056 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151575014753 0.056905535591 266% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.0 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.48 50.2224549098 -31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.6 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.08 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.09 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 10.7795591182 306% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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