The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The diagram illustrates how a hydroelectric power station produces electricity. The whole procedure comprises of two parts of a day, a night shift and a day shift.
Overall, the process starts by accumulating water in a high level reservoir where the river acts as the source of energy and ends at the power station by producing and transmitting electricity through the national grid.
The first stage commences near the dam, where the reservoir collects water during the night-time. Later on, during the daytime, the opening of the gate under the dam allows water to flow toward the reversible turbines, which generate electricity. Following the generation of electricity, a set of power lines distribute electricity through the national grid.
However, during night, the reversible turbines pump water into the high level reservoir through opening the gate of the dam by alternating the rotational direction of turbine blades. The alternation is done with the help of generator, which provides the required energy in the form of electricity supplied by the grid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...oduces electricity. The whole procedure comprises of two parts of a day, a night shift and a...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irst stage commences near the dam, where the reservoir collects water during the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39053254438 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94361897769 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2883287125 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198801887382 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101482948051 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134946294714 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119979559952 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695024750353 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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