At the glance of the diagram reveals some steps how to create electricity by using geothermal energy (such as water and rocks) until it can be used and distributed at geothermal power plant.
Overall, it can be seen in the diagram that there are 5 steps till electrity can be produced by certain treatment. Before electricity can be used in power plant, some installements such as water container, wells, condenser, generator and turbine also must be used along with it.
First step is cold water pumped down to injection well, after that transferred through geothermal zone and sended up by the production well to condensor. Turbine spins because stream by condenser then it build electricity energy and saves in generator.
In conclusion, electricity can be produced by several steps of geothermal operation by processing material such as water and rocks, however those materials need certain treatment to create new energy (electricity).
- Some modern artist receive huge sums of money for the things they create while others struggle to survive Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
- Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead.To what extent do yo u agree with this statement? 78
- Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination. Other think money and appearance are more important.Disscuss both sides and give your opinion. 84
- immigration has a major impact on the society.What are the main reasons of immigration ?To what consequence can it lead ? 78
- The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'builds'?
Suggestion: builds
...ins because stream by condenser then it build electricity energy and saves in genera...
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Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndenser then it build electricity energy and saves in generator. In conclusion,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, then, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23841059603 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8688876251 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2063628623 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.833333333 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103994405884 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558869691107 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362710095056 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697175374228 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346856769547 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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