The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram explains different stages involved in the production of geothermal energy from cold water.

Overall, a geothermal power plant mainly consist of a well located under the ground level and a cold water reservoir, condenser, turbain, and a generator kept above the earth.

To begin with, the well is situated 4.5 km deep into the earth where it forms a geothermal zone inside comprising of hot rocks. The cold water from the tank first move into the well through an injection well where it get hoter on passing through the hot rockes. After this hot water is pumped out of the well through the production well. The hot water thus produced then directly enter into the condenser outside the wall similar to cold water storage part.

Later on passing through the condenser water is changed into steams and are pushed into the turbines which result in rotation of the same. This inturn are in contact with the generator and produce electricity in response to the movemennt. Following this, the so generated electricity are taken out for distribution through electricity lines.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: COMPRISING_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprising' or 'consisting of'?
Suggestion: comprising; consisting of
...where it forms a geothermal zone inside comprising of hot rocks. The cold water from the tank...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gets'?
Suggestion: gets
...well through an injection well where it get hoter on passing through the hot rockes...
^^^
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oter on passing through the hot rockes. After this hot water is pumped out of the wel...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, thus, well, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02762430939 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50384155873 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2251699084 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0502728594315 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250225436932 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228191663144 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0379078960604 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223947858111 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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