The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

The given process diagram provides information about various stages of making instant noodles. It also shows different types of process or procedures that noodles goes through before it is sent for dostrubution.

First of all, flour is received at the storage soils in tankers. It is then taken inside the factory where it has to undergo eight different procedures. The processes are, firstly add some water and oil in the flour, then put this mixture in the dough sheets with the help of rollers. After these process are over, the next step is with the help of bleds dough cut into strips and make noodles discs. Following this process, after noodles discs, cooking these discs in oil and let them dry.

Furthermore, in these drying noodles put in the cups and add some vegetables and spices on this. Last step, take labels and sealing these noodles cups and packed are loaded in the van for distribution to various shops.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...before it is sent for dostrubution5. first of all, flour is received at the storag...
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...add some vegetables and spices on this. last step, take labels and sealing these noo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, as to, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85534591195 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36185085567 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8108337988 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129989295162 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521660829655 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458078668712 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994480115098 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613046770186 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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