In some countries people spend long hours at work. What does this happen? Is it positive or negative development.
Although individuals are busy in their life, yet they spend extra time in their jobs. It is happen because desirable salaries and promotions, even i believe overtime working carries positive implications.
To commence with, the merits of working on an hour's is to achieve a desirable wags, also it is the way of to enhance wags compare to other employees. For example, in many companies gives the extra payment for overtime, because if the worker give a more time to work then it is beneficial to company only. The reason behind this, the deadline of the work is short, thus if workers give extra time for this then they dealt their work on time and impress their employer.
Moreover, spend long time at work, also be the reason for get promotions and become a aspiration for junior and mutual staff members. However, if a individual give more time then they become more professional and doing their work smartly. For instance, a person has ability to deal with bottlenecks, busy periods, cover their absences easily. Furthermore, they concentrate their work easily and become stress free, so they become a star of their workplace and become a example of other work members or get promotion easily.
To sum up, i convinced that working overtime is primarily attributable to the desirable wags, get a promotion and become a aspiration for other members of staff. So, it is a positive development for country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93723849372 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69196059487 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531380753138 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2348117093 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.272727273 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148389893215 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675062218873 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460810917653 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978750104007 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113846331006 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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