the diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
Academic Task 1 - Frog Life Cycle Sample
Task
The diagram below shows the life cycle of the frog from the egg stage to an adult frog.
Complete Report
The diagram shows the life cycle of the frog from the egg stage to a fully grown frog. It is clear that there are six stages in the life cycle of a frog based on the information that is shown in this diagram.
The first three stages show the frog in the early period of its life. The life of the frog begins at the egg stage. From the eggs, the frog then moves onto the embryo stage. The embryo stage shows the very early development of the frog from egg form to tadpole form. The embryos emerge from the eggs, with eyes, at a size that is a little bit larger than as it continues to develop. At the third stage, which is labelled as the tadpole stage, the tadpoles become longer and slenderer than right after the egg stage. In the last part of the tadpole stage, its legs break through and are formed on the tadpole.
In the next three stages, the frog emerges in a more familiar shape. In stage four the tadpole characteristics are now more frog-like, with the tail of the tadpole still remaining. At this stage, the frog is also now able to start pulmonary breathing on its own. At the final two stages, those being stage five and stage six, the frog develops into a tadpole frog, and then finally into a fully grown adult frog, thus completing the life cycle of this amphibian.
To sum up, this diagram shows each of the six stages in the development of the life cycle of a frog.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 333, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...he eggs, with eyes, at a size that is a little bit larger than as it continues to develop....
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 70, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... frog emerges in a more familiar shape. In stage four the tadpole characteristics ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, still, then, third, thus, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 291.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35738831615 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06921877865 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429553264605 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9332129962 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5333333333 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272764308579 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132798409435 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124520136415 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242319062676 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111563650166 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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