The diagram illustrates the process by which canned pears are created.
Overall, there are 14 main stages in the process, beginning with collecting the pears by hand and ending when each canned pear is sent out.
To begin with, ech pear is picked by hand and then transported to the factory. Next, those pears will be washed and carefully checked for quality. In steps 5 and 6, the pears have been cooled and weighed. After that, the skin of the pear will be peeled off and then cut into pieces.
After completing the cleaning and processing phase, each pear is packed into cans and neatly sealed.
In steps 11 and 12, before being brought to the warehouse, each can of pears will be disinfected and labeled by the manufacturing company. In the final step, after bringing to the warehouse, the canned pears are dispatch.
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