The picture demonstrates a variety of stages involving in canning fresh fruits.
Looking at the diagram, it is clear that this process comprises of a number of operations. It begins with gathering fresh fruits and concludes with transporting final products.
At the beginning of the process, the fruits are hand picked at a farm or a plantation. Next, they are transferred by trucks to a factory where they are washed. After being washed, the fruits are subjected to a rigorous quality check before being stored in low temperature. Then they are weighed and divided into various grades of quality. Subsequently, the fruits are peeled, scored and sliced into smaller pieces.
The process continues with the canning of the fruits. The cans are sealed tight to prevent from permeating before being cooked and sterilized under intense heat. The labels, which provide the name and brand information, are then attached to the cans before being stored in the warehouses. Finally, the products are transported to the retailers and wholesalers where they are consumed.
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- The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits Write a report for a university lecturer the process below 56
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- The chart below show the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... diagram, it is clear that this process comprises of a number of operations. It begins with ...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oked and sterilized under intense heat. The labels, which provide the name and bran...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2514619883 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76081617409 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7840774923 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.8333333333 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58333333333 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109281603153 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382441386031 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278657855766 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578259224549 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343466625864 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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