The diagram below shows the percentage of deaths from heart disease and cancer, and calories consumed from processed foods in different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart provides information on proportion of deaths from heart disease and cancer and it also depicts percentage of calories consumed from processed foods in 12 countries.
A paradoxical pattern is observed in the graph. The percentage of heart and cancer diseases is the highest in Hungary at 90% whereas percentage calorie consumption is the least at 9%. Every 8 in 10 Americans are suffering from heart or cancer disease followed by Belgium, Sweden and Finland where the proportion remains between 60 to 70%. Moreover, cancer and heart patients remain in the range of 45% and 55% in Portugal, Venezuela and Greece. Lastly, less than 20% people suffer from such diseases in Mexico, Korea, Thailand and Laos.
On the other hand, calorie consumption from processed foods is the highest in Laos (90%), followed by Thailand (70%), Korea (59%), Mexico (48%) and Greece (37%). Moreover, intake of calories from processed foods in countries like Hungary, USA, Belgium, Sweden, Finland, Portugal and Venezuela is in the range of 10% to 30%.
Ironically, the countries where less calories are consumed show a higher proportion of cancer and cardiac diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 33, Rule ID: LESS_DOLLARSMINUTESHOURS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer calories'?
Suggestion: fewer calories
... Ironically, the countries where less calories are consumed show a higher proportion o...
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Line 15, column 33, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun calories is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... Ironically, the countries where less calories are consumed show a higher pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, lastly, moreover, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23936170213 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66072315619 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5783330175 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376024506419 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148171243168 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10166203742 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247252813355 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799811205495 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.