The diagram below shows the process from Australian Bureau of Meteorology of collecting up-to-minute information for the purpose of producting reliable weather forecasts.Describe the process in detail.

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The diagram below shows the process from Australian Bureau of Meteorology of collecting up-to-minute information for the purpose of producting reliable weather forecasts.
Describe the process in detail.

The diagram illustrates the process of weather data collection and forecast production employed by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology. The process can be roughly divided into three stages.

At the first stage, the data is collected in the form of satellite photos, radar screen readings, and synoptic charts. According to the diagram, the production of these synoptic charts, too, relies on the information from satellites, radars as well as drifting buoys.

Next, these satellite images, radar readings, charts and data collected are analysed and interpreted in order to make predictions about the weather. All these predictions and information, with the help of personal computers and workstations, are converted into weather forecasts that can be understood by the general public.

Finally, the forecasts are made available to the public in three modalities. People who have access to television can receive weather updates as announcements read by TV presenters. Others can obtain forecasts while listening to the radio. However, those who are interested in weather updates provided on-demand, without having to wait for the scheduled TV and radio announcements, can obtain them by dialing a corresponding number on a phone and listening to pre-recorded messages.

Overall, this process appears to be designed to ensure that the Australian public have access to the most up-to-date and reliable weather forecasts.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...forecasts that can be understood by the general public. Finally, the forecasts are made ava...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62962962963 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02101691652 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587962962963 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6689332427 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.545454545 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225812159123 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847644163306 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097372041805 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139501445354 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981230918311 0.0819641961636 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 11.4140731707 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 40.7170731707 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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