The diagram below shows the process of using water to produce electricity.
The diagram illustrates how electricity is generated using water.
overall, power generation process consists of over a ten stages, which starts with the evaporation of water and ends with the distribution of electricity to different places.
The process begins with the evaporation of water due to sunlight. Vapor produced from this get together and form clouds, which get converted into water droplets due to change in atmosphere temperature and results in rain. This water get stored in dam reservoir. Valve at the bottom of the dam gets open and water starts to flow at the turbine blades and rotate the turbine to produce electricity.
After this water is being sent back to water reservoir using water pump. Now the electricity generated from turbine is transmitted to transformer station through high voltage cables. Finally, in transformer station electricity is transformed into required form then it is supplied to the various sectors by underground cables.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...electricity is generated using water. overall, power generation process consists of o...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e the turbine to produce electricity. After this water is being sent back to water ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3660130719 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86352095017 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9611629391 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257878505335 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112795751121 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829785518087 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159594665871 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669677024498 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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