The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow-chart describes different stages in the process of making bricks for constructive purpose.
Overall, it is clear to see that the process has seven stages, beginning with taking the raw material for making bricks and ending with the delivery of finished product.
First, the clay, which is taken from the ground by a digger, is put on a metal grid to shatter into small species before moving to a roller. Then, after adding some water and sand, there are two ways to form the mixture into the shape of bricks. One is using the wire cutter to cut that thick mixture into many rectangular cuboid shapes and another is using a mould.
In the next stage, all the raw bricks are dried in the drying oven from 24 to 48 hours. Then, they have to go through three different rooms with different levels of heat. At first, they are put into the second kiln with the high temperature, from 870°C to 1300°C after being under moderate temperature, 200°C to 980°C in the first kiln. Then, they are moved to cooling chamber from 48 to 72 hours. After that, all the bricks are ready to be packed into large blocks and transported in trucks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... being under moderate temperature, 200°C to 980°C in the first kiln. Then, they a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62745098039 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22980492162 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.992141975 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0845084367939 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361310832544 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519811879673 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764337714094 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602677587645 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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