The diagram depicts the stages in milk production as well as the manufacture of other daily products.
Overall, there are five stages in the process, beginning with the cows grazing the grass and ending with these milk products are being purchased by consumers.
The first stage in the process is cows feeding the grass in the field. For a period of twice a day, these cows are brought from the farm to the milking facility where they are milked by a milking machine. These milk which are produced daily is kept fresh in the refrigerated storage tanks. Every day, the milk is collected by trucks and transported to a daily factory. It is here that milk and other daily products are created.
Usually these milks undergo pasteurization which is helpful in killing harmful bacteria through heat-treating. Some of the milk is converted into other products such as cheese and butter. These finished products are transported to shops and supermarkets and thus is ready for consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...harmful bacteria through heat-treating. Some of the milk is converted into other products s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, thus, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01212121212 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67324258071 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551515151515 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0372174975 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209194183535 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922463057022 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478071318034 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138263748593 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188422099864 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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