The given process depicts the stages in the production of olive oil.
Overall, it is clear that there are seven main stages involved in the production of olive oil. The process starts from the picking of olives and culminates at the delivery of olive oil to the market.
To start with, olives are picked from Olive trees. After that, the fresh olives are washed in Cold Water. Then, the olives are put on a belt before placing them in a smashing machine in which they are smashed and separated into olive Stones and Olive paste.
In the fourth stage, the olive paste is put into a bag with holes and the whole thing is put in a pressing apparatus where it is pressed to get maximum liquid. In the sixth stage, this liquid is put in another smashing device in which water and oil are separated through distinct outlets, then oil is packed in bottles for storage and sale in the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...live oil to the market. To start with, olives are picked from Olive trees. Afte...
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...are picked from Olive trees. After that, the fresh olives are washed in Cold Wate...
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...h olives are washed in Cold Water. Then, the olives are put on a belt before plac...
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... and Olive paste. In the fourth stage, the olive paste is put into a bag with h...
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... get maximum liquid. In the sixth stage, this liquid is put in another smashing d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48148148148 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10525503572 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0635533597 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175390726963 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969961794023 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442218157306 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132422130881 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417619839337 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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