The diagram below shows some design principles for an energy-efficient house and how they work in different climates.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram depicts the basic functioning of an energy-efficient building both in a warm and and cold environment.
Starting with the former, the key part of the system is the reflective material used to build a roof capable to reflect the sunbeams and therefore to avoid the penetration of the of the heat inside the house which is protected even from the ground, because the floor is below the ground level.
The last feature is also important during the winter,when the temperatures drop down: an interred floor is capable to retain the heat generated inside the building and this effect is boosted by the triple-glazed window that allows more warmth and heat to come inside and to not sniff out, this greenhouse effect is corroborated by the insulating walls, which are constructed using special materials that do not allow the heat to go out.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...nergy-efficient building both in a warm and and cold environment. Starting with th...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of the'.
Suggestion: of the
... and therefore to avoid the penetration of the of the heat inside the house which is protecte...
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Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...ture is also important during the winter,when the temperatures drop down: an interred...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95862068966 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81592211545 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.4926829268 213% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.200103199 43.030603864 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.666666667 112.824112599 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.3333333333 22.9334400587 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0733955757914 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616536428544 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445692143682 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616536428544 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445692143682 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.2329268293 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 61.2550243902 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.9970731707 193% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.