The diagram below shows some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.
The provided layout represents the information about the difference in structure of houses in cold climatic regions and warm climatic regions.
Overall, it is evident that the only changes in the houses in cold and warm climate is of insulation , windows and roof.
It can be seen that the roofs of houses in cool climate are inclined at some angle comma the roof is heightened from the direction of sun. Moreover, Windows are also made at the side of high angled roof, so that large amount of sun rays can easily enter into the house. Search houses are internally built with thermal building material; furthermore, they are insulated from all sides.
Whereas, houses in warm climate are build in such a way that in day time sunlight cannot enter into the house by building overhung roofs and in night time more and more wind can blow through the house by providing ventilation through windows on both the sides of house, which remains closed in daytime and opens in night. In addition, houses are build with thermal building material with insulation only at roof and reflecting roof provides additional safety from hot days.
- Some people say that self-employment is better than working for a company or institution. Discuss both points of view. What is your opinion? 78
- In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some peoplethat this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require security a man can bring. To what extent you agree or disagree? 84
- The given diagram shows the process of making water clock. 73
- The bar chart below shows the results of survey conducted by personal department at major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows favtors affecting their work performance. 56
- Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21 To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n cold and warm climate is of insulation , windows and roof. It can be seen tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90625 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41610834449 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.0007614943 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.571428571 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107970260348 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582561625618 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344758083981 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762570747523 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00722156778441 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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