The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram illustrates the steps and minor details on how equipment usage of the cement-modifying process and how cement is consumes the proportion for the construction process. Overall, the first diagram shows how cement being processed into a hunk of concrete for industrial purposes.
Firstly, limestone and clay mixed and crushed into a crusher and develop in a powder form. The powder then goes to a pipe of a mixer which has a rotating heater, where the heat is given on the other side of a pipe. After these process, the powder falls onto a grinder and form a cement that packs in minor bags.
On the second diagram, cement 15%, water 10%, sand 25% and finally gravel 50% were poured into a concrete mixing container to mix all four ingredients together to combine materials together.
- Do you agree that modern technology has given us more leisure time than before? 56
- Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree 91
- Many people nowadays travel aboard for their university education Why do people do this and will you consider doing this yourself 58
- The table below shows the information and prediction regarding the change in the percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries 51
- The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, crimes, accidents, faminesWhy do you think that is?Do you think the news should be balanced with both good and bad news? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65740421188 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654411764706 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1340289546 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30824460123 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150152358141 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147471868298 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196460145875 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174748325653 0.0819641961636 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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