The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminum drinks cans
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant
Write at least 150 words.
The illustration depicts how aluminum beverage cans get recycled.
It is clear from the diagram that the entire process consists of 7 stages. These stages include the collection of used cans to the melting and remolding of recycled aluminum, and finally the transportation of recycled cans to vending machines.
To begin with, at the collection center, cans are gathered in recycling bins, then sorted according to the materials they are made from, such as aluminum and steel. Next, the aluminum cans are transported to the recycling facility, where they are compressed into cubes ready for melting. Once the aluminum cubes are melted, they are molded and turned into pure bars of aluminum.
Subsequently, these bars are flattened into sheets and wrapped up into rolls. Afterward, new cans are produced which will be refilled. In the end, they are distributed to vending machines to be consumed. After that, the entire process is repeated over and over again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and turned into pure bars of aluminum. Subsequently, these bars are flattened i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, then, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21153846154 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67966353241 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7266912793 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170434783792 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063162248306 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556353128435 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103715476441 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593810092124 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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