The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram represents how bricks are constructed for the building industry.
Overall, there are seven stages in the brick processes, beginning with the digging up of clay and culminating in delivery.
To begin with, the clay used to make the bricks is dug up from the ground by use of a digger and this clay then placed onto a roller by passing through a metal grid in order to break up the clay into smaller pieces.
After this, sand and water are added to the clay before they placed in a mould to form a brick shape or cut by a wire cutter. This brick formed clay is placing in a drying oven for 24-48 hours before moving to different ovens with three temperatures from moderate (220 to 980) to high (870 to 1300) before cooling at a cooling chamber for 48 to 72 hours.
Finally, the bricks from the cooling chamber are then processed with packaging ready to be delivered.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'if', 'then', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220930232558 0.268076937826 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.191860465116 0.116061578633 165% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0406976744186 0.0759168565197 54% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0232558139535 0.0366838410393 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00581395348837 0.0131127313244 44% => OK
Prepositions: 0.168604651163 0.155750635184 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0988372093023 0.0379272487307 261% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.34396145832 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0639534883721 0.0210936926555 303% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0116279069767 0.00175180941692 664% => OK
Determiners: 0.127906976744 0.0948980150116 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00581395348837 0.00967000014798 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 877.0 1161.00487805 76% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.9 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44720496894 5.90752243213 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73763899035 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27950310559 0.337110787985 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.180124223602 0.247514529752 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0993788819876 0.171178102325 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0745341614907 0.112407865282 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34396145832 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596273291925 0.546246751206 109% => OK
Word variations: 52.4375181666 49.3433353143 106% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 26.8333333333 23.0094962315 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5417760689 42.9750493124 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.166666667 135.714022679 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 23.0094962315 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 44.8457556936 47.7609492067 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.21052631579 2.94281807926 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399228264961 0.418131533498 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.222371199343 0.181151798455 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0578144689294 0.0850326197045 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.915819682148 0.706616315825 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134463370608 0.157042692854 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251344216704 0.228904883108 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116341300546 0.108899403657 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.247314071877 0.367819155151 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0605769381639 0.0812612215331 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281576390609 0.316326947829 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100126814344 0.0921553760075 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.