The illustration explains how bricks are produced for the industrial purpose.
Overall,it is clear that this is a man-made linear process with seven main stages that starts with the digging up of clay and ends with the delivery of bricks to retailers or whosalers.
To begin with,the clay is used to make bricks being dug up from the ground. After that,this material is placed onto a metal grid,which is used to break up the clay into small pieces. In the following stage,sand and water are added to the clay,creating a mixture;also,this mixture is turned into bricks by placing it into mould or using a wire cutter.
Next,these bricks are placed in an oven to dry for 1 -2 days.Subsequently,the bricks go through a heating and cooling process.They are heated in a kiln with moderate and then a high temperature,followed by cooling process in a chamber for 48-72 hours. Finally,the product is packed and deliveried to their customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed for the industrial purpose. Overall,it is clear that this is a man-made linear...
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...etailers or whosalers. To begin with,the clay is used to make bricks being dug u...
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...being dug up from the ground. After that,this material is placed onto a metal grid,wh...
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...his material is placed onto a metal grid,which is used to break up the clay into small...
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...nto small pieces. In the following stage,sand and water are added to the clay,creatin...
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Suggestion: , creating
...age,sand and water are added to the clay,creating a mixture;also,this mixture is turned i...
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...dded to the clay,creating a mixture;also,this mixture is turned into bricks by placin...
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Suggestion: , these
...o mould or using a wire cutter. Next,these bricks are placed in an oven to dry for...
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Suggestion: Subsequently
... placed in an oven to dry for 1 -2 days.Subsequently,the bricks go through a heating and coo...
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...n oven to dry for 1 -2 days.Subsequently,the bricks go through a heating and cooling...
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...o through a heating and cooling process.They are heated in a kiln with moderate and ...
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Suggestion: , followed
...ith moderate and then a high temperature,followed by cooling process in a chamber for 48-...
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Suggestion: , the
...ss in a chamber for 48-72 hours. Finally,the product is packed and deliveried to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34184343777 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617834394904 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2126818767 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245886237348 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11295198555 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962799952937 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162702569067 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922290798971 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.