In modern era,animals are used as a way to trial scientific research.While some people believe that creature should be treated equally as human do,others oppose that it is vital to exploit them for food and medical research purpose.This essay will examine both given perspectives.
One the one hand,there are some reasons why people believe that it is acceptable to the exploitation of animals.First of all,animal research exerts an enormous influence on medical breakthrough such as blood transfusions or penicillin antibiotics. In other words, many vital discoveries involved experimentation on animals.For instance,vaccine testing on rats enables human being to find out treatment for cancer.Secondly,it is believed that how responsible these research are not being pain or loss as human do,so if animals are killed,they are ethically acceptable.
On the other hand,I strongly advocate that the lives of animals should be respected.To specific,It is not fair to put animals’lives at risk for human purposes due to the fact that animals undergo as pain as humans do.For personal example,I observed a documentary film which a crocodile is killed for cosmetic purpose and this creature struggle with its death that really become an obsession of mine.Furthermore,the threats to wild animals do not always directly affect the human being,but they play a pivotal role in ecosystem balance which people live on.If creature are on the verge of distinctions,the public will no longer exist without them.
In conclusion,I’m inclined to the proposal that killing animals is cruel and inhuman since the lives of all creatures should be respected.Therefore,measures can be taken to ensure the rights of animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65834380519 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.776068726 49.4020404114 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.0 106.682146367 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.2 20.7667163134 251% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.4 7.06120827912 459% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329836680729 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176151298886 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546521447885 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200379437392 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429008232264 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.9 13.0946893788 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.48 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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