The given pictorial chart reveal the information about how to produce bricks for building work with complete process.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the process start from collection of clay with the help of digger machine and complete with packaging.
To begin with, there are ample of step, while forming stone for industrial work, such as 6-7 step. First step, commerce with digger machine collect clay for made up bricks. After this, with the help of rolling machine, metal grid separate from clay. In the next step, sand and water add in the raw material for two type of manufacturing, first, as a consequence of cutting machine and second, preparing with the help of mould.
Moving further, before sending into different chamber, cutting bricks placed into drying oven for 24-48 hours. In the following step, bricks going into moderate hot chamber with 200°c to 980°c. Prior sending to cooling chamber, brick prepared at 870°c to 1300°c. In the cooling chamber stage, bricks are stored for 2-3 days and after then packaging. In the eventual stage, bricks is ready for delivering. All these steps crucial, whilst making bricks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21808510638 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30698424878 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8977673593 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135731501154 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058110320241 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044193042133 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918809674526 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572157994624 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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