The process describes the way in which, brick is produced. Overall, there are 8 steps in the process, beginning with the extraction of clay from the ground and cumulating in the delivering of packaged bricks to the destination.
Fist of all, clay is extracted from the ground by a large digger. After that, the clay is spread in a metal grid with the assist of a roller. As soon as sand and water are added to the clay, they are cut in bricks shape by a mount or a wire cutter. Afterward, bricks are dried in a drying oven for 24 to 48 hours. The next step is that the dried bricks are heated with moderate heat in a kiln, then they are transferred into another kiln to keep on being heated with high heat. After having been heated, the bricks are moved to a cooling chamber to cool down. This process takes 48 to 72 hours to complete, after which the bricks are packaged. Last, the packaged bricks are delivered to the destination by trucks.
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- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.375 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35265697345 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3244047573 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102257023598 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462487408207 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331784228068 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939871285209 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0125684857629 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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