The diagram show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes
The given diagram shows the information about the two stages the process of cement making and then how cement is used to produce the concrete for building purposes
To begin with, it is clear that the process of making cement. Firstly, the limestone and clay, crushed and make powder to together then passed through a mixer . In addition, then it is rotating heater in machine as well as passed from heat other side . Then the grinder to products and then cement process is complet and then packed in bags and send to market for selling.
Moving ahead for next diagram , it is started next process of concrete production. After compelled the cement process. Firstly, it take the cement 15% , water 10% , sand 25% and gravel 50% of the collected together. Therefore, then sand in concrete machine and rotates fast as clock wise direction ingredient then after some time the concrete process is ready for make to housing and building.
Overview, it is evident that it collected all the equipment for complete this process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oduce the concrete for building purposes To begin with, it is clear that the proc...
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... to together then passed through a mixer . In addition, then it is rotating heate...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...hrough a mixer . In addition, then it is rotating heater in machine as well as pa...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ting heater in machine as well as passed from heat other side . Then the grinder ...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... as well as passed from heat other side . Then the grinder to products and then c...
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...lling. Moving ahead for next diagram , it is started next process of concrete...
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...ing. Moving ahead for next diagram , it is started next process of concrete p...
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...ed next process of concrete production. After compelled the cement process. Firstly,...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
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...pelled the cement process. Firstly, it take the cement 15% , water 10% , sand 25% ...
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...rocess. Firstly, it take the cement 15% , water 10% , sand 25% and gravel 50% of...
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...cess. Firstly, it take the cement 15% , water 10% , sand 25% and gravel 50% of t...
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...tly, it take the cement 15% , water 10% , sand 25% and gravel 50% of the collecte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92485549133 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40078996383 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560693641618 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9361762745 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.447261096939 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17049181393 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196492281869 0.0843802449381 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308619839442 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.24661410079 0.0819641961636 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.