The presented diagram illustrates how the fruit is canned.
Overall, the are fourteen stages and the process begins with picking the fruit and it ends with despatching by trucks. Most states in the process are done by machine, although the picking and quality control are done by hand.
Initially, the fruit like a pear is picked by hand and transported by truck to start the canning process. In the first stage in the factory, the fruit is washed and then it is checked by Quality Supervisors. Next the fruit is stored at a cool temperature. Then the fruit is weighed and peeled. After that, it is cored and sliced in smaller pieces and then they are canned. Subsequently, the cans are sealed by automatic arms. In the next stage, the cans are cooked and sterilised through a special heating process and then the cans are labelled. Next they are stored for despatching by the trucks to distributors and markets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75471698113 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58365820946 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503144654088 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4151629874 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7272727273 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119834088942 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530877484814 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521082245584 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104725389333 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069790115644 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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