The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town
Regarding to the diagram in the screen i'll explain how to the austrakian people in the town collected the rain water for drinking.
When the rain water is falling to the ground the rain water automatically will fulfill the drain around the houses in an australian town.
The rain fulfill the special storage that available there, then the water will pass many storages and steps the will filter the rain water.
So after passing four storages that will be the basic filter for the water, then the rain water flow into the machine which will filter out the bacteria and viruses.
Next step the water flow into the storage called water treatmen. This storage will filter the water in it and all the hazardous chemical content.
Well, the last step is the water ready to distributed to all the houses in an australian town.
So, this those are the steps filtering the rain water in an australian town.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... collected the rain water for drinking. When the rain water is falling to the ground...
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Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'fulfills'.
Suggestion: fulfills
...houses in an australian town. The rain fulfill the special storage that available the...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n. The rain fulfill the special storage that available there, then the water wil...
^^
Line 4, column 54, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing four storages that will be the basic filter for the water, then the rain wate...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74050632911 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21023858953 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 127.690721649 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474683544304 0.622605031667 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6173276698 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270301869101 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15511419669 0.0766984524023 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860137521628 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169545536995 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821666320495 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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