The diagram shows the life circle of the honey bee.
The diagram below illustrates the process of maturity from eggs of the honey bee.
Overall, it is clear that the life circle of this species has four steps and lasts between 34 and 36 days. The process begins with the eggs are born by females, and the maturity to become the new adult bee will end the circle.
In the first stage, one or two eggs are laid by mature females every three days. The next steps, after 9-10 days, eggs hatch and become insects or nymph which have the shape like a mature bee but smaller.
In the third stage, these nymph shreds their outside shell three times at 5 days, 7 days and again at 9 days to become the young adult bee. After the young bees have emerged from insects, it takes them 4 days to mature. Becoming the adult honey bee also finish the life circle of this species.
- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Whycould this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? 67
- The pie charts below show the proportions of the total school expenditure in five different sources between 1981 and 2001. 61
- In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 67
- the diagram below shows the process of generating electricity from coal 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...finish the life circle of this species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37254901961 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.82021156689 2.65546596893 69% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3933751306 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.625 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249644337618 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121274930262 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115585323298 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16081689476 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828446829041 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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