The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth.
The given layouts reveal the information about the life cycle of the silkworm by their stages and production of the silk cloth by some process.It is a clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that,there are four life stages of the silk worm;eggs,silkworm larva ,silk thread,and moth.
It is crystal clear that,In the life cycle of the silkworm,firstly,the moth lays its eggs then after 10 days,silkworm larva hatch from the eggs,and eat mulberry leaves.Then,after 4-6 weeks,the larva covered around with the silk thread,and after 3-8 days of process full cocoon has produced.
The production of the silk cloth has derived from some process;Firstly,cocoon put into a boiled water after boiling cocoon has unwounded and stragled with many threads.Then,after the thread can be either dyed and then woven into silk worm or the thread can be either woven and then dyed subsiquently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
...ction of the silk cloth by some process.It is a clear and coherent representation....
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...t representation. It can be seen that,there are four life stages of the silk worm;e...
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Suggestion: , silkworm
...e four life stages of the silk worm;eggs,silkworm larva ,silk thread,and moth. It is c...
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Suggestion: ,
...ges of the silk worm;eggs,silkworm larva ,silk thread,and moth. It is crystal c...
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...lk worm;eggs,silkworm larva ,silk thread,and moth. It is crystal clear that,In th...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ilkworm larva ,silk thread,and moth. It is crystal clear that,In the life cycle...
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...ad,and moth. It is crystal clear that,In the life cycle of the silkworm,firstly,...
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...r that,In the life cycle of the silkworm,firstly,the moth lays its eggs then after 10 da...
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...he moth lays its eggs then after 10 days,silkworm larva hatch from the eggs,and eat mulbe...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... days,silkworm larva hatch from the eggs,and eat mulberry leaves.Then,after 4-6 week...
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Suggestion: Then
...h from the eggs,and eat mulberry leaves.Then,after 4-6 weeks,the larva covered aroun...
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Suggestion: , after
...om the eggs,and eat mulberry leaves.Then,after 4-6 weeks,the larva covered around with...
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...eat mulberry leaves.Then,after 4-6 weeks,the larva covered around with the silk thre...
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...arva covered around with the silk thread,and after 3-8 days of process full cocoon h...
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...th has derived from some process;Firstly,cocoon put into a boiled water after boiling c...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'boiled water'.
Suggestion: boiled water
...om some process;Firstly,cocoon put into a boiled water after boiling cocoon has unwounded and ...
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Suggestion: Then
...nwounded and stragled with many threads.Then,after the thread can be either dyed and...
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...nded and stragled with many threads.Then,after the thread can be either dyed and then ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31690140845 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63214423334 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8760758926 43.030603864 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.75 112.824112599 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 22.9334400587 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287891207071 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212322033198 0.103423049105 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11213653609 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212322033198 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11213653609 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.