The provided flowchart illustrates the labeling process of shellfish and sending them to the market in an orderly manner and includes various stages of collection and preparation together with transportation to local and international marketplace. The product preparation process is initiated with the fishing stage, which is monitored automatically through a complex monitoring system from the center of Santiago. This means that all boats are connected to GPS systems and find their locations and important data through satellite communication.
As observed from the flowchart providing shellfishes for the market is a complex process that is done in several stages. After fishing using the advanced methods, there are three other main stages beginning with certifying catch by putting barcode labels, following by processing the product in factories and finishing with exporting the final product to the local and international market.
In the first stage, after catching shellfish a unique barcode label is generated for them. This is the stage of certifying catch in a labeling system. Once this is done; the product is processed through a shellfish processing plant. Finally, the processed product is transported by different modes of transport to the market.
In summary, this flowchart shows the various stages of collection, preparation and transportation of shellfishes to the marketplace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an orderly manner" with adverb for "orderly"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hellfish and sending them to the market in an orderly manner and includes various stages of collecti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69047619048 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10423965809 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4380162257 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227446209765 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101054831003 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635313855347 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146695234303 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578462571408 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.