The flow chart gives information about how cocoa beans are picked, pressed and processed
0verall, there are three main phases employed to process cocoa beans which begins with picking and culminates with the consumer.
In the first stage of processing cocoa beans, the whole beans are carefully picked from the shells and dried. Following that with the second stage, there are two exclusive categories of pressing the beans. On the one hand, the beans are further pressed into cocoa cake and ground into cocoa powder or cocoa liquor. Eventually, the resultant cocoa powder reaches the consumer industry. Here they are made into cakes, drinks.
On the other hand in the second stage, the pressed beans are further refined into industrial chocolate. At this phase, sugar is added before it is processed finally. In the end, the finished chocolate products are are sent to the consumer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
...he end, the finished chocolate products are are sent to the consumer
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te products are are sent to the consumer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15862068966 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28060112651 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0119662889 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1111111111 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361268222267 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131960023215 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107922425866 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217010705534 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603743741354 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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