the diagrams below show the development of the horse over a period of 40 million years.
write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The diagram gives us a brief range of horse evolution over 40 million years. In general, the development of horse can be investigated through their shape of feet. The diagram has shown that the horse has no change drastically on his body shape except his foot. The body had the same despite it developed bigger, and modern Horse has more curly hair than his ancestor. Moreover, through evolution, the number of horse's finger tend to decrease in number.
Eohippus, the first-found horse, 40 million years BC, had a foot with four fingers. After 10 million, that foot evolved. Mesohippus that lived in 30 million years BC had three fingers instead of four. However, after 15 million years the number of fingers resembled Mesohippus' finger only Mcrychippus's foot was bigger than his ancestor.
Lastly, at the end of evolution, modern Horse, the finger tends to lost. Modern Horse only has one big nail without a finger.
- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and g 96
- Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others think people should be free to choose Discuss both views and give your opinion 90
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports or musicians.Discuss both these views and g 78
- Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas in the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...only has one big nail without a finger.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, lastly, moreover, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94193548387 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48030745635 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6422334503 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6363636364 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156823615225 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067329114088 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636444011053 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954633558215 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741631327078 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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