The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by eyraen on Fri, 07/27/2018 - 14:15

The diagrams illustrate, the silk worm life cycle and the stages of silk cloth production. There has 4 different stages to complete the cycle.

Initially, life cycle starting from the egg laid by mother worm on mulberry life. After ten days larva emerged from the egg and eat sufficient food that leaf of mulberry. Which stayed on leaf for about 2 weeks and produce silk thread all around the ody covered itself. These thread fully covered on larva and which named as cocoon happened again after three to eight days from the production of thread by larva. Cocoon remained on position round 16 days and later moth come out from the cocoon.

On the other hand the process of silk cloths has some more easy than the thread production in terms of duration such as, after collection of thread boll from silk worm put in to the bottle with water. Again, take out the bulk from bottle and unwind each thread layer by layer approximately 300 to 900 meter then twist the thread. The next step of cloth production was apply dye over the thread, for that unwind layer dipped in to the collected dye bottle with appropriate colour. This thread now ready for weave the cloth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...layer by layer approximately 300 to 900 meter then twist the thread. The next step of...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'applied'.
Suggestion: applied
.... The next step of cloth production was apply dye over the thread, for that unwind la...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64734299517 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15499010593 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584541062802 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.1327823657 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4545454545 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135917690024 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658284945958 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850840113405 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137429422539 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102717717258 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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