The diagrams below show the design for a wave energy machine and its location.
The diagrams illustrate, how to work wave - energy machine and suitable location of machine. Overall, machine is worked by the help of waves on the seashore.
Design of this machine has two chambers that are one chamber is related to the waves from sea, and another chamber id combined with turbines and generator. With regards to the waves and water levels air flow pass through the canal to the second chamber and by that, turbines rotate voluntary. Similarly, air flows from outside pass inside the chamber, and other turbines rotate also. Meanwhile, generator would produce electricity as depen...
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The diagrams illustrate about
The diagrams illustrate about the design of a wave-energy machine and its location.
From these diagrams we can see that the installation cost change depending on the output levels and the main property of a wave energy machine is its turbine.
Overall, an electricity generator consists of chambers and turbine. Moreover, when there is large waves, the installation costs of wave energy machine are high and when the waves are small, the costs are significantly low.
In the bottom of an electrical generator there is a open portion from where the waves pass inside the generator. Then, air flows towards the upward direction and reaches to turbine. After that, air moves out from the generator with the help of the top open portion of the generator.
In addition, in the left hand side of the generator, there is are some open spaces from where the air can comes down and passes trough turbine and reaches to the water.
In conclusion, it is very much cogent that, the design of the wave-energy machine is not very complex.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... the chamber, and other turbines rotate also. Meanwhile, generator would produce ele...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, nevertheless, second, similarly, so, well, while, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89805825243 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39538518726 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543689320388 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3023333253 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7272727273 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164831744177 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077731666001 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751676860342 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141409646253 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858073094884 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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