The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph illustrates, the data of peoples science qualification in Malaysia and Singapore. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall, it is clear from that, majority of Malaysians are absent of academic knowledge in science. While, both countries has relatively same amount of people has master degree in science too. Moreover , Singaporeans makes up bachelor degree holders account only higher than Malaysia.
In Malaysia, approximately 65 % of people does not have science knowledge which is about five percentage higher than Singapore. Singapore consists of 60% of no qualified science personal. Whereas, regarding bachelor degree, about 10 % of people from malaysia has graduation in science in turns of Singapore, which is 20%.
In terms of Master degree, Malaysia and Singapore accounts for about 10% respectively. Whilst, the highest percentage of people from Singapore has bachelor degree in compared to Malaysia. Such as, 20% of people in Singapore was graduate in science. In comparison, only 10 % of people had bachelor degree in science in the country of Malaysia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55421686747 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98508402622 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8342391151 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8333333333 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116533155119 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495611258367 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346459590122 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811050530255 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193000372185 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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