In today’s world of advanced science and technology, many still greatly value artists such as musicians, painters and writers.
What can the arts tell us about life that science cannot?
Science and technology have been enhanced more though, the importance of art workers are continuing to grow. This essay describes the incredible service and supplies of art to society in terms of emotional, psychological and social.
To begin with, innovative technology and modern science have a tremendous role in the day to day life of people around the world. These settings gathered people in one platform and improvise the relations and pleasure of society. Novel science would mitigate many medical and surgical problems through early detection and proper treatment.
Nevertheless, art has an inevitable role in peoples minds and bodies than science in certain situations. Arts and artistic variables provide relaxation, motivation and some sort of survival in everyone's life which could not be gotten from science. Many written articles would enhance the depressed mind and encourage them to surpass the crisis. Similarly, music is often plays a crucial space everyones life irrespective of age gender and race. For instance, lots of experts says that arts would be a better remedies to inhibit many problems in peoples mind when science fail. In addition, artistic sculptures and paintings would always flourish and guide the history, geography and science mysteries to the core. Such phenomenon always inter connected to the development of science and technology,therefore it is often thinks artistic values would not be decline.
To sum up, it is true that modern science and technology has escalated nowadays. Even though the value of arts and artists would not be decreased due to the facts of everlasting empowerment in mind, body and social situation was a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, sort of, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36981132075 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88397692271 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8809394269 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2521445463 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839790608219 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440987667997 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14530811626 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294397746303 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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