The given diagrams depicts the working of a wave-energy machine and the locations in which these machines can be placed in the ocean.
The basic structure of the machine is that there are two chambers, namely an upper and a lower chamber. The upper chamber is where the electricity will be generated and a lower chamber is where the water will be enetering.
As we can see in the first diagram, the sea water enters the lower chamber because of the waves, thereby increases the amount of water and compress the air in the lower chamber and the air flows into the upper chamber. Now this air is used as a propellent to spin the turbines. These turbines are connected to the electrictiy generator and as the turbines spins, this generate the electricity.
Now moving on to the second diagram which implies the pros and cons of building these machines near the shore or far away inside the ocean.
The pros of installing the machine near the shore is that installation costs will be less and the con will be lower output by the machine beccause of smaller waves.
On the other hand, the advantage if builing this machine far into the ocean is the higher ouput because of larger waves in that location, whereas the cons will the construction costs will be high.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s, namely an upper and a lower chamber. The upper chamber is where the electricity ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68303571429 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4293878289 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477678571429 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9704682445 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.555555556 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139163040261 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06728568421 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899706581566 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953114899696 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971472500601 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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