The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pictures illustrate different stages of how a large fish species named salmon develops in its habitat.
Overall, there are various steps in the life of a salmon, from eggs to fully-growth adults. Besides, this process also consists of 3 distinct locations in the development of a salmon, namely upper river, lower river, and open sea.
In the initial stage, the salmon’s eggs are located in the upper river. They are under the reed with the protection and cover of small stones. Next, an egg gradually grows slow-moving into such species otherwise called fry at approx 5 to 6 months with a short size length, about 3 to 8 centimeters.
The process continues with the fry maturing into a new type named smolt in the fourth year. The individuals of smolt move to the lower river which has a fast flow, with longer tails and increasingly in size, in the range of 12 up to 15 centimeters. The salmons no longer continue to inhabit the lower river because they will move to a new area that is more suitable for their lifestyle. One year later, salmon move to the open sea, at which point smolt fully develops into an adult one with a big size increase threefold compared to it when it was a smolt. Finally, the cycle begins again when two fully-grown salmons, which are capable of breeding, mate and spawn at the upper river.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63713080169 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50929657115 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603375527426 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0824164926 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9090909091 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0872661605134 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376900152902 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388501610541 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072113619765 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402521402241 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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