The diagrams below show the present building of a college and the plan for changes to the college site in the future . Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These Comparison graphs compare the current outline of a college building with a plan to redesign the same building in 2020.
According to the graphs Many changes will be applied in order to refurbish the current building, including locations of entrance, library and reception. However, some parts of the college will not change and remain in the same locations such as bus stop, lunch area and car park.
Having looked the given graphs, we can easily find out that the most visible change to the current building will be the reception area. Reception which is in the right side of the building will be replaced with toilets and toilets will be constructed in the upper side of the building instead of entrance. By replacing the library with one of the classrooms in the left side of the building, most classroom will be on the right side of the college.
In the northern part of the building, garden and footpath will be removed and in entrance section will be installed in the southern part of of the building. This way, a shop will be constructed in the north of building which is not in the map now. Also, the car park area will be more spacious by removing footpath. It is clear that lunch area as well as bus stop will not change at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...de of the building will be replaced with toilets and toilets will be constructed ...
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...he northern part of the building, garden and footpath will be removed and in entr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41604899155 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477678571429 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2673313814 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865963612246 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457628580166 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053959421211 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816264972967 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06470377971 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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