The flow charts represent two different industrial processes of making cement and concrete for construction purposes. As one of the components, cement is used in the production of concrete.
Firstly, limestone and clay pounded into powder by going through crusher. Then these fine particles are mixed and continuously carried in special heater, which rotates constantly. The warmed substance is conveyed afterwards to grinder that reduces it into smaller fragments. Eventually, cement is packed in bags in order to be transported thence and used in other commercial processes.
One of them is production of concrete, which consists of cement for 15 percut. In addition water, sand and gravel are affixed into the barge rotating container, also called mixer. To make a good texture, it is necessary to follow restricted amounts of each component. Thus, concrete is made of small stones halfly, whereas only tenth is added water. Sand is estimated to exactly quarter of a mixture.
Overall, clay and limestone undergo four various stages to become cementous powder, which later is included in production of concrete.
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
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- The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began 78
- People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? 67
- The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons there relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ch consists of cement for 15 percut. In addition water, sand and gravel are affixed into...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, thus, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42285714286 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8183422541 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674285714286 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0919794395 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197270836297 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651165663648 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757514096353 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128788904911 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100710546526 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.06136585366 127% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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