The pie chart given, depicts an idea of how UK students responded to the question asked about describing their self financial organization.
Overall, we can say that their is considerable difference seen in the students way of organizing at different levels. The table given describes as to how different age group students organize very well variably.
We can clearly see that percentage of fairly organised students is the highest. On contrary, not at all organised students percentage is the least. On the other hand, very organised and not very organised students numbers are very similar ranging from 20% to 21%. from this we can say that majority of students in UK are fairly organized with percentage range of about 55%.
The table given below, illustrates the idea about how students of different age group are very organised. organisation level of students of age above 26 years is very impressive with about 35% of students falling under this category. On the other hand, very organised percentage of all students and those of age group 23 to 25 is similar, ranging from about 21% to 26% with students of age upto 22 years having least number.
In conclusion, we can say that there is not much percentage difference in very organised and not very organised students.
- The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present 78
- The diagrams below show UK students responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Some people think that children should be encouraged to play outdoor games that require physical activit instead of playing computer games in the home Do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ganization. Overall, we can say that their is considerable difference seen in the ...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
...e very similar ranging from 20% to 21%. from this we can say that majority of studen...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Organisation
...different age group are very organised. organisation level of students of age above 26 years...
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Line 7, column 405, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the least'.
Suggestion: having the least
... 26% with students of age upto 22 years having least number. In conclusion, we can say th...
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Line 7, column 412, Rule ID: LEAST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'least numb'?
Suggestion: least numb
...th students of age upto 22 years having least number. In conclusion, we can say that ther...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, as to, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02336448598 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73642322265 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471962616822 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0486155718 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7272727273 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13224541111 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686006646198 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255858300506 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874589207211 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315491492508 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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